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I wrote a critique on your 50 Shades of Wade piece. From that piece to now, your lighting is definitely showing marked improvement (Deadpool's costume is not light-friendly, though). I love the lighting in this piece, particularly because the light is used to highlight texture on the skin. I may had added some more shadows in the hand to highlight the fingers, though, because though the fingers are visible in the enlarged piece, it still looks a bit muddy. The eye on the woman feels as if it is acting more like the bird's eye (which are naturally on the side of the head) versus a human eye. I know a human can be in this position, and I'm not sure if it was intention for it to be similar to the bird's eye.
I love the hair/bird. The brushes you used created a natural movement in the hair, which helped the bird translate well into it. The bird itself is well drawn, and I like how you blurred the majority of the wings to imply movement. I also like that, even though it is blurred, each of the feathers was treated with shadows, giving the bird itself a sense of it taking up space on the plane.